18 December 2014

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Fishing 2014: Sangkar Penang 2nd Bridge

1 Nov 2014
Sangkar, Jeti Kg Changkat, Nibong Tebal, Penang.








07 December 2014

Chapter: Experimental 1

Salam, common mistakes untuk tesis sepatutnya tidak timbul bila tesis telah dihantar kepada examiners. Tapi bila dapat tesis dan hadir pada meeting viva, perkara sama berulang2.

So kita share sedikit tips utk Chapter: Experimental, harap kita boleh improve tesis kita:
  • Chapter 3 paling pendek selepas Chapter 5 (Conclusion) dan Chapter 1 (Introduction). Anda boleh guna Appendix untuk lampiran panjang yang tidak penting e.g. org yang buat modeling.
  • Short as possible, but can be reproduced.
  • Mesti straightforward kepada experimental anda.
  • No more Literature Review here (LR is in Chapter 2!).


AVOID:
  • Review ‘how the mechine works’ di sini (benda ini semua dah settle masa undergraduate tahun 1, 2 lagi).
  • Refs boleh diletakkan (cite) jika ia sangat2 penting i.e. anda follow sebijik method dia (kalau dah 2 bijik, xperlu cite lagi).
  • Letak GAMBAR components mesin yang BASIC….. i.e. utk XRD; tube x-rays, sample holder, geniometer (benda ini semua dah settle masa undergraduate tahun 1, 2 dah).
  • Letak GAMBAR MESIN (technician tengah senyum operate mesin) …. i.e. tgh click SEM, HRTEM! (tesis bukannya buku manual alat).
  • Sample name (Coded yang banyak dan panjang) dalam bentuk text/paragraphs.
  • Repeat methods in R&D!
Good:

  1. Give detail TEXT, but do not overdo.
  2. Consider using FLOWCHART to explain your experimental design. Jika ada flowchart keseluruhan kerja dalam 1 muka surat saja, mungkin pada mukasurat kedua Chapter 3 (utk bantu examiner tak faham text, mereka boleh refer terus to flowchart).
  3. Gambar dlm Chapter 3 bukan tidak boleh. PHOTO and SCHEMATIC DRAWINGS very important to imagine your experimental set-up (e.g. attachment).
  4. Buat TABLE untuk susun nama dan composition sample (coded sample). All additional details can go into appendices.



Penafian: Ini untuk level beginner/FYP saja, yang sudah expert mungkin ada methods lain. Anything pls consults with your SV and Universiti masing2. Khilaf adalah rahmat.
Good luck!

05 December 2014

turkey 2014 | aya sophia 2



Results & Discussion 2 | Writing Paragraphs That Flow and Connected

Salam jumaat, sambung sikit lagi berkenaan menulis Results & Discussion.

Menulis untuk menyambung sentences/paragraphs/figures/idea yg ‘ada flow’ bukannya mudah bagi students baru (mahupun students lama… hehehe). Untuk mencapai “Writing Paragraphs That Flow and Connected” boleh dicapai jika rajin follow papers some respected professors.

Apa benda tu ‘flow’? 
Contoh sentences dan paragraphs mudah (copy-paste dari Uncle Google):

1. Link the subjects of juxtaposed sentences.
“To heat the sample, tungsten-halogen lamps are used below and above the fused silica tube. These lamps contain a tungsten filament and bromide gas inside a quartz bulb. By resistive heating alone, the lamps can attain temperatures of 300 °C to 400 °C.”

2. Link the end of one sentence to the beginning of the next sentence.
“The film is not completely oriented in a single direction, and the system includes a number of entanglements. These entanglements become frozen into position as the film crystallizes.”

Macam-mana nak connect Figures/results/paragraphs/idea?
Contoh pict (attached)… author connect Figure 1 dengan Figure 2 pada paragraph ke-2 dan pada sentence terakhir (lihat arrow). Lihat juga… connecting dibuat selepas siap discussion. 


Note: authors ni memang sudah hebat sbb tu dia takperlu cite refs :)